Writing is a skill that has to be honed over time, but today, Carnsight Communications Account Manager, Leigh-Ann, is sharing seven quick tips to take your writing to the next level.
1. Always say what you want in the least number of words possible
I’m a chronic rambler in real life. I used to ramble a lot in my writing as well (still do sometimes). But the reality is, the quicker and simpler you can say it, the better.
And don’t worry if you find this difficult. Ramble all you want in the first draft and then be brutal and cut, cut cut! A writing mentor of mine used to call it ‘changing up the gears’. Read through your writing and see if you can spot where you were changing up the gears and when you hit full speed. Cut the gears part. (Thanks, CJ Skuse!)
2. Consider planning what points you want to make ahead of time
Sometimes it can be helpful to jot down the points you want to make before you start writing. That’s what I did to write this article. This will help you focus on what it is you want to say without having to work your way up to it through writing waffle.
3. Interrogate your use of adverbs and adjectives
As a general rule, think no adverbs, few adjectives. You can definitely break this rule. In fact, I would encourage you to eventually. But remember you have to learn the rules to break them.
If you’re using too many adverbs and adjectives, chances are you just aren’t picking strong enough words. Rather than saying ‘he said loudly’, perhaps ‘he shouted’ works better. Again, it comes down to conveying meaning in the most concise and considered way.
4. Avoid overusing exclamation marks
Exclamation marks are very useful but like any device, when overused they can really bring down the tone of a piece of writing. Exclamation marks are used for emphasis. But don’t overemphasise!
If you overemphasise too much then it becomes meaningless! It can even feel like you’re being shouted at!
5. Learn your literary devices
I know it may remind you of dreaded English classes at school, but having a few literary devices in your toolbox can be a really great way to take your writing to the next level.
Some of the most common literary devices are:
- Simile
- Motif
- Allegory
- Juxtaposition
- Point of view
- Metaphor
- Imagery
- Symbolism
- Flashbacks
- Foreshadowing
You may think that these literary devices are only present in novels or pieces of fiction, but the reality is that these devices are used to engage the reader in all types of writing; including non-fiction. These techniques are present in the great classic pieces of literature because they work. Try using a few in your own pieces of writing and see what a difference it makes.
6. Avoid staccato sentences
Staccato sentences are short sentences written back to back. When used appropriately they can create tension and build pace within a piece of writing. When used incorrectly and too often, they make a piece of writing feel bland and monotonous.
Avoiding staccato sentences is all about understanding the rhythm of your writing. Rhythm in writing is about varying your sentence length. Think about how we talk. We don’t use sentences repeatedly with the same syllables and sounds. The rhythm of our sentences changes. Let me show you what I mean…
“This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety.
Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.”
― Gary Provost
7. Really think about tone and how word choice impacts this
Tone and voice are all about how a piece of writing sounds and feels. What vibe or feeling does the piece of writing give off? Your word choice will massively impact the tone of your writing and so it’s always important to take extra care when it comes to choosing the right words. It’s not just about conveying meaning, it’s about how you convey that meaning.
Use too much industry jargon and waffle and your tone will be pretentious and condescending. Use over-simplistic language and you run the risk of insulting the intelligence of your reader. It’s all about striking the right balance.
Most of us will alter our tone and word choice appropriately automatically when in conversation, but it can be harder to get it right when writing things down. I’d advise reading your work aloud. Imagine you’re reading it to the very audience you’re trying to reach. Does the tone feel right?
Bonus tip! Tools like Grammarly are a lifesaver.
You don’t want to be reliant on these kinds of tools, but they can be incredibly helpful, particularly when you’re starting out. We’re not affiliated with Grammarly in any way, but it’s a tool I use myself and recommend to anyone trying to tighten up their writing.
If you found this helpful, then you might like the blog Leigh-Ann wrote on the best pieces of writing advice she ever received.
Facebook rebrand? Say what?
Facebook, one of the most used products in history has announced its rebrand to Meta and there is a huge splash on social media with online users sharing the news and having conflicting opinions. Perhaps there is a slight confusion of what is actually happening.
Facebook, the social media platform isn’t getting a rebrand as such, however, the company that owns Facebook, WhatsApp and Instagram, is.
Meaning Meta will be the Parent Brand for the social media apps, including Facebook, and any new products and services that may be completely irrelevant to social media.
The misconception
Facebook is indeed an iconic media brand however they claim that they want to be and do more than that. Drifting away from the misconception of Facebook being the social media platform only.
Having one of the social media apps being called the same name as the parent company creates confusion and lessens flexibility, meaning not being able to move forward and grow. It doesn’t encompass everything they do today and especially their future plans.
I think that there was just a lot of confusion and awkwardness about having the company brand be also the brand of one of the social media apps,” he said. “I think it’s helpful for people to have a relationship with a company that is different from the relationship with any specific one of the products, that can kind of supersede all of that. Mark Zuckerger
https://www.theverge.com/22749919/mark-zuckerberg-facebook-meta-company-rebrand
Meta solves the issue
Moving forward Meta wants the business to focus on two different segments. One for the social apps and one for future platforms. A new company brand to encompass everything they do and build.
Mark Zuckerberg states that the mission remains the same: bringing people together, still the company that designs technology around people. ‘Connection is evolving and so are we’.
Meta, derived from the Greek word beyond, symbolising that there is more to build.
A new brand system is applied
Creating a brand system that is able to hold under the different segments. The social media products such as WhatsApp, Instagram and Facebook, as well as any new products and future platforms.
Each product has a unique purpose and appeals to different audiences, based on culture, age, region, lifestyle, profession, et al. Therefore it is important that they are differentiated between them.
The image below illustrates some of the brands Meta currently holds and how they will probably be divided.
Brand architecture
Brand architecture is the way a company structures and presents its products to the target audience. It’s the relationship between brands within an organization and how they interact with one another.
Companies grow and target various audiences through different acquisitions and product lines, brand architecture is articulating a key structural system, helping each type of product to connect with the right audience and form perception.
It creates clarity by having a structure that achieves a robust system achieving flexibility and a system that can align and support any future plans; new lines of products, services.
There are a few strategies and methods applied to create brand architecture, each one serves a different purpose. See below.
Branded house (monolithic):
A single master brand, using one visual system. Sub-brands are differentiated by descriptors, not logos. Usually, they are easier to manage and consumers choose based on loyalty. However, it is harder to target a specific audience and their needs.
House of brands (pluralistic):
The house of brands is basically the opposite of the branded house. It detaches the master brand from any of its products. The parent company is irrelevant and ‘invisible’ to the individual products that it distributes, enabling them to even compete with each other. If one of the brands is under a crisis, the others would not be affected. With this method is easier to target desired audiences, yet it can be the most costly one.
Hybrid (endorsed):
This category allows products to be associated or disassociated (to any level) with the parent company. Usually to benefit from the visibility of the company’s parent. It can also be used in the reversed way; when a product should not be linked with another one or the company parent at all. It is the most flexible approach yet hard to comprehend and manage.
You have probably heard of branding in relation to business branding. But what is personal branding and is it really necessary? Personal branding is all about you. It’s how you present yourself to the outside world and how the outside world perceives you. Your personal branding should showcase your skills and experience as well as your personality, which is the most unique thing about you. If done correctly, personal branding has the power to shine a positive spotlight over you. It can help you stand out from the crowd and give you the professional boost you need.
But why is personal branding important?
In today’s world, where everything is shared and discussed on social media, it’s more important than ever to mould your public persona in ways that work for you. Personal branding allows you to communicate exactly who you are and what it is that you do. Ignoring your personal branding may lead to you unnecessarily missing out on opportunities relating to employment, partnerships and/or even networking. According to CareerBuilder (link here), more than half of employers won’t hire potential candidates without some sort of online presence.
The good news about personal branding is that, for the most part, you can be in control of it. You have the ability to mould your image to whatever it is you are wanting to project to the public. It does take time and patience. Always remember that you are leaving an online footprint that might be tricky to get rid of in the future, so always be mindful of what you decide to share.
How to get started on your personal branding journey
Developing your personal brand is hard work but essential to your online presence. Luckily, due to the increase in social media platforms, it has never been easier to get started. Here are some important tips to remember when considering your personal branding journey.
Be genuine
The difference between branding a business and branding yourself as a person is that it is easier for people to build trust with actual human beings than with other businesses. This means it is easier for authentic relationships to be built via personal branding. By sharing stories, you can better build connections and allow others to create bonds through similarities they have or have experienced. Be authentic by always matching your actions to the way you are branding yourself, and most importantly, aim to provide others with some sort of value.
Have a plan
Note down what it is you aim to achieve. Now decide on how you plan to get there. Be aware of what your strengths are and use them to your advantage! Be proud of the skills and experience that set you apart from the rest and let this knowledge guide you. Believe in yourself but remember that it is equally important to be aware of your weaknesses to allow for further growth.
Consistency is key
Be sure to have a presence and to post consistently across all social media platforms. Keep the theme unified as this establishes your personal branding amongst a variety of audiences. You will likely find that different platforms will bring you different opportunities and have different benefits, so it’s important to be a part of them all.
Remember, it doesn’t happen overnight! So be patient and most importantly, have fun with it.
In a recent blog post, we shared our top tips on what you should avoid when pitching to journalists. There we talked about the common errors PR professionals or companies can make when pitching to a journalist, and gave some advice on what to avoid to ensure your news is featured by the target publication. Today we wanted to delve even deeper and teach you how to craft the perfect pitch.
In today’s world, securing the PR you desire can be tricky; journalists are busy with endless press releases flooding their inboxes making it hard to stand out from the crowd. We’re going to make your life a little easier by teaching you how to find and connect with the right publication for your business, and how to write the perfect pitch.
Finding the perfect publication for your business!
You’re about to start your PR campaign but you find yourself stuck on the first hurdle; Where do I pitch my news? Well, this is where we can help you! You’re going to need to do your research to find publications, journalists and relevant websites or bloggers to pitch to. To make sure this publication is right for you, you’ll need to have a thorough understanding of your ‘ideal‘ target market and identify the publishers who match your needs. Remember to keep track of these as they can stack up quickly.
The five W’s
A great place to start when creating your perfect pitch is with the five w’s: who, what, where, when and why. Ask yourself; what is it that you want to achieve through this PR push?
When you have set yourself a clear objective, you will find it much easier to identify your target audience and craft the key message you are looking to communicate.
List out the themes or topics and then begin your research on specific publications that cover your key themes – make sure you fit your story around what they would typically write about!
Research, Research, Research!
When you are happy you have identified your target audience, start researching other industry-specific journalists. Familiarise yourself with the stories they cover, keep a note of journalists’ contact details who cover relevant topics and research them before reaching out. Taking some time out to network with these key people will prove key to the success of your campaign.
If you find yourself at a loss at this stage, try looking into what publications your competitors are featured in. Detail these publications along with the specific journalist contact information for that story. This will help you get a feel for the news they feature whilst providing details of target publications.
Keep a detailed and up-to-date media list
Once you are happy you have identified your target publications, you will need to ensure you keep track of them. Keep the key information stored within a document that allows you to update and amend regularly (such as an Excel doc). At Carnsight Communications, we do just this with our media lists.
Within this tracker, the basics are needed such as publication title, journalist contact details and key themes or topics they cover etc. Never be afraid of targeting the bigger titles either. Often, smaller businesses feel they aren’t as interesting as the larger organisations out there, but this is not true. If you have a fresh perspective or a new idea – make sure you do your research and then reach out!
Engage and build on the relationships
OK, so you now have your list of target publications to pitch to (media list). What’s the best way to get in touch?
At Carnsight Communications, we’re all about building relationships with you, our clients and also with journalists. Building and maintaining these key relationships is a huge part of what we do and the results we achieve.
When you have found your target publications and journalists – look them up on social media, follow them and engage regularly. Never underestimate the importance of this. It’s vital to expand your network.
You will often find a link to the reporter’s contact information within their social media bio. This allows you to pitch to them directly or just to introduce yourself. Being present and engaging often will have many benefits.
Start crafting your perfect pitch
Now you have researched and sourced the target publications for your business, and you’ve started networking with these contacts – you’re ready to start crafting the perfect pitch!
Keep in mind the five w’s (who, what, where, when and why)
It’s all in the storytelling. What is the news you’re sharing about? Remember to always keep your target audience in mind.
- Provide all the information that makes the story. By providing all the information, reporters are more likely to feature because they have less work to do.
- Make sure to clearly define your purpose: What problem does your product or service solve? Who is your audience and who has that problem?
- Why you’re the expert in this field? What experience do you have on this specific topic and what sets you apart from others in your field of work?
Present the perfect pitch; professional and concise.
Some other great tips for reaching out to target journalists are:
- Check out where that journalist is most active online (such as Twitter or LinkedIn) and keep a note on your media list.
- Draft out a personalised and detailed pitch. Remember to keep it short and sweet.
- Use a subject line that grabs attention – don’t leave it to chance! Now is the time to be noticed.
- Include a ‘boiler plate’ of your ancillary materials in case these are needed. These include a short company bio, links to the website and social channels alongside a folder of different sized images. Ensure these images are labelled to support the journalist.
- Respond quickly – don’t leave them hanging. If you send out a release, make sure you keep an eye on communications and respond as quickly as you can. Don’t leave the journalist hanging on for days as they will not want to work with you again.
- Get to the point – bullet points are often preferred.
- Be polite and personalised. Remember journalists are people and we all like to be greeted nicely, try to research a little about them as individuals. Do they share details of their personal lives on social media such as likes or interests? If so, tailor your greeting around these details.
Keep it consistent!
Last but by no means least – let’s look at how you’re going to make the above happen!
It may seem difficult to get time in your diary to get pitching but our best advice to you is for you to schedule an hour or so every couple of weeks that is solely dedicated to researching your target publications, cultivating your existing contacts, and staying in regular contact.
Remember to regularly update your media lists and engage often on social platforms. Get involved with those conversations online, add your valuable input and stay fresh in your target audience and journalist’s mind. Be consistent with this and the results will speak for themselves.
We hope you have enjoyed reading through these tips on crafting your perfect pitch. If you need more advice on what a pitch is and how to craft a winning pitch, MuckRack has outlined some great pointers here.
Originally posted on: www.carnsight.com
Social media analytics allows you to improve your business strategy and optimise engagement via the collection of data. This data will help you and your team better understand your audience and learn what is working for you and what isn’t. It also allows you to set benchmarks to compare against the future performance of your brand.
Although it is possible to collect basic data manually, social media analytic tools allow for quick collection of data that is easy to understand. With just a few clicks your business will be given a data-driven plan for the future of your social media channels, allowing you to monitor metrics and data trends ensuring your business won’t fall behind.
Here are three ways social media analytics can help your business
1. Measure your performance
I think we can all agree that the main objective of a brand having a social media presence is to improve business. Social media analytics provides instant feedback on business performance. This means that you can quickly pick up on strategies that are not working for your brand and improve them before it’s too late. Social Media analytics not only works to measure how your social media pages are performing in terms of likes, shares and follower growth but many other aspects as well, such as click-through rate which is traffic that has been directed from your social media channels to your webpage.
2. Teaches you more about your audience
Do not underestimate the power of your audience. Your followers are a big part of how well your business performs, so be sure to encourage engagement across all your channels. By using social media analytics, you can monitor the rates of engagement by what posts attract the most views, likes, comments, shares and click-throughs, allowing you to constantly post effective material. Make sure your content evolves with your audience and stays in line with trends that are relevant to your industry.
3. Shows you where you rank amongst competitors
Doing well as a business is great. But not when your competitors are miles ahead and are doing better. Social media analytics allows you to compare your performance with competitors and show you where you rank amongst average industry performance. This data will help your business figure out how much it needs to improve to be one of the best businesses in the market. Your business can also monitor accounts of competitors, taking note of their strengths and any weaknesses that your business may be able to fill in.
Although social media analytics can seem a little scary to those who are new to it, it really isn’t that complex once you get the hang of it. Keep an eye on our blogs for more on social media analytics in the coming weeks.
As PR professionals, pitching to a journalist is part of our every day and is almost second nature. It’s key to remember when pitching to journalists that there are a few things we must avoid. In this blog, we will be sharing with you our top tips covering what to avoid when sharing a potential story, and some expert tips on nurturing a positive relationship with the media.
Journalists get a daily barrage of press releases and sorting through them can be challenging. They will spend the majority of their time filtering through emails with the aim of finding content that is actually newsworthy. That’s why it’s important that we assist their duties by sending through details that they need or want whilst making that journey for them as smooth as possible.
It’s vital as PR professionals that we recognise habits and other little things that frustrate journalists and aim to avoid them where we can.
1. Make sure your pitch is relevant!
Before sending any email through to a publication or journalist, make sure to do some research on them beforehand. Have they covered a similar topic or theme previously? Is the pitch relevant to that publication’s readership or audience? Does your pitch stand out from the others? Make sure your pitch is relevant before proceeding any further.
2. Avoid sending a pitch without detailing why it is relevant
If you want to make sure you give your pitch the best chance of being seen and featured, ensure to include an explanation of why this story is relevant to them. This can help journalists to save valuable time and will increase your chances of receiving a response to your pitch. Be it a yes or a no, a response to a pitch is great for future networking possibilities.
Remember to keep your pitch snappy and to the point. You can also explain why your pitch is perfect for the audience within the first few lines of your pitch.
3. Time that follow-up call correctly!
Most journalists will be happy to receive a call from a PR professional. But there is a time and a place for a follow up after sending a pitch email. Don’t overdo it!
There is nothing more annoying than having your head deep in a document only for your phone to start ringing, right? You lose your train of thought and can often be sidetracked elsewhere. Keeping this in mind, it’s absolutely vital that we keep these follow-up calls to a minimum. This saves time for both you and the journalist.
Personally, after pitching a release, if I haven’t had a response within the first three to four days – then I will make a follow-up call. Upon making this call, I keep in mind that the journalist is likely to be busy so will always start off the conversation with ‘I hope this is a good time for you to take my call?’. Once confirmed – now is the time to stand out. Ensure to ask the journalist how they are, get to know them a little and start building that relationship. Avoid too much time-wasting and small talk, however.
Another tip when it comes to making that call; NEVER call a journalist outside of their working hours or whilst they are on annual leave. Research their specific working hours and contact during these times. Calling outside of these times shows a lack of respect.
4. Be personable
When sending out a pitch make sure you include a name and a snappy but relevant greeting and tailor the copy to that specific publication. This shows the journalist that you know who they are, what they write about and importantly, that you know your stuff. If you stand out to them and engage with them like a colleague, they are more likely to reply to you.
5. Keep the load to a minimum
Avoid overloading a journalist with several pitches as this can be harmful to your relationship.
If you have more than one release to share at one time, select the most relevant for now and give that release enough ‘air time’ before proceeding to send on more.
Also, keep the email chasing to a minimum. Don’t keep sending your pitch so that it’s floating at the top of the journalist’s inbox. Journalists don’t have time to respond to every pitch they get individually. So, if you don’t hear back assume it’s a no.
Sometimes we may not ever hear back from a publication after pitching news or we may even get a straight ‘no’. That’s OK. Never argue with a journalist about the decision. Respect the decision and move on. There is no harm in trying again with your next story.
6. Proof, proof and proof again!
This point can not be stated loudly enough! When sending a release to a journalist make sure you have gone through your copy with a fine-tooth comb. Nothing looks more unprofessional than a release full of typos. Double-check your email before sending it to any journalist making sure their name and the company they work for are correct.
We all make mistakes from time to time. Even PR professionals will make mistakes but when a press release is filled with grammatical and factual errors, a journalist is more likely to simply delete it. Remember to proof, proof and proof again. You can never proof too many times.
7. Offer interviews/ speakers
Another vital step in ensuring a response to your pitch is to make sure there is someone that the journalist can talk to if they wish to do so. Most often than not a journalist will want to put their own spin on the story in order to make it different or unique, so having the option to collate more details is a must.
We hope you have enjoyed our top tips on what to avoid when pitching to a journalist. By following these steps you will maximise your chances of organic media placement whilst maintaining great relationships with the media.
A biography (or bio) is a great way to give potential clients, customers, or employers a quick snapshot of who you are. It’s a chance to show off your experience in the industry and share whatever it is that makes you different. In PR, biographies are essentially used for pitching purposes but can be edited slightly and used as a branding tool on other platforms such as on your website or social media pages.
A good bio should be a summary of your resume/CV, consisting of approximately four to eight sentences that read in a creative fashion. As readers are usually short on time, your biography needs to be concise and able to pack a punch. Here are four things to include when writing a good biography:
Start with the basics
Start your biography with your name along with your current job role or profession. Think of this as the title of your biography.
List your experience
A good way to start your biography is to list the experience you have had in your industry and how it has led you to where you are today. A brief history tells readers where you’ve come from and allows you to list your biggest accomplishments.
Your current role
Once you’ve managed to fit your past work experience into a couple of creative sentences, it’s time to fast forward to the present. Let readers know what your current job role is and how long you’ve been there. You do not have to follow this format. Feel free to start with your current role and work backwards if you prefer. However, it’s important to show readers what makes you special and what it is that you offer your industry that others may not.
End with some personality
Although this part is optional, ending your biography with some personality is a great way to stand out amongst the crowd. Feel free to mention a fun fact about yourself such as ‘speaks five languages, or ‘is a karate blackbelt’. Unlike resumes/CVs which are usually quite formal, you can be a little more flexible when writing your biography.
If you’re still stuck on how to write a good biography, here is an example from Jessica Morgan, founder of Carnsight Communications:
Jessica Morgan
In 2016, after 15 years of working with high-profile clients at TEQUILA\, Craik Jones and Proximity and then as Director of PR agency Pumpkin, where she worked with M&C Saatchi among other global brands, Jess founded PR consultancy, Carnsight Communications.
Passionate about the benefits well-executed PR brings to businesses big and small, Jess loves working directly with Carnsight clients and the media to create campaigns that resonate and deliver beyond expectation.
Since setting up Carnsight, Jess and her family moved from London to the West Country where she is the proud owner of a lively cockapoo (Clifford) and a burgeoning vegetable plot.
Abode PR, the Bath-based, award-winning global B2B technology public relations and content agency, is celebrating its 5th birthday and a record 400% growth in revenue during 2021.
The agency was masterminded by Founder and Managing Director, Jessica Gillingham, a Bath native and former director of Visit Bath. It originally set out to help raise the profile of transformative technology solutions operating within the travel accommodation industry through specialist public relations.
Under the strong leadership and vision of Gillingham, the scope of Abode PR’s work branched from PR into Content Marketing. The team now comprises a team of 10 all based in the South West, with a hub in the centre of Bath.
In the last eighteen months alone, the agency won retained and project work for companies leading in their sectors and was recognised on the shortlist for ‘Agency of the Year’ at the Creative Bath Awards 2021. During this time Gillingham, who regularly is invited to speak on travel tech and female entrepreneurship panels, podcasts, and webinars, has been nominated for an award as an industry pioneer.
Jessica Gillingham commented, “It’s very unusual for a UK-based agency to have its entire client base located around the world, and a sign that we have well and truly carved out a niche for ourselves within this dynamic sector. I’m particularly proud to credit our company’s success to the talented team we have built, who all hail from within the South West and delighted to celebrate this milestone with them and our clients today.”
For more information about Abode PR, please visit abode-pr.com.
What is a press release?
First things first, a press release is a clear, written summary of a piece of your news, aimed at journalists. It should give the reader all of the key information they need to write a story. A press release is usually accompanied by good images (more about why images matter to the media in our post).
Are press releases still useful?
There’s been talk of the death of the press release recently but, written in the right way, we still think they’re an incredibly useful tool. As a PR consultancy, it gives us the chance to sum up a story in the way that works for clients (we always seek approval before pitching one out) and journalists.
When should you write a press release?
Think about writing a press release when you have something clear and interesting to communicate. Before launching into writing a press release document, make sure you’re clear on what the news or angle actually is. Can you articulate the nub of the news in one or two lines?
Always bear your target audience in mind when writing – not just the publication but your end target. Is this relevant to them? And why?
And think about the media you’d like to get it featured in. Do they definitely feature news and not just opinion pieces or features? Have a good look at the paper, magazine, channel or site and see if they use similar stories to yours.
How should you write a press release?
You can vary the format depending on what you’re trying to communicate (for example, bringing a quote in earlier or leading with images). You can also tailor it to specific publications – for example making it more about your local area to local press. We keep the tone straightforward and clear – not too punny or boastful! But here’s a simple structure to kick you off.
Your company logo
Headline
What’s your news in a nutshell? Think snappy and eye-catching
Statistics or figures always stand out here
Date, your location
First paragraph
This is a key one. What’s the overall story in 3 – 4 sentences?
Keep it clear and simple.
We include a strong image high up in the release for interest (make sure you also include a link to a high resolution (300dpi) version of it or a selection of images).
Subsequent paragraphs
Give further detail on the story. Ensure it’s based on facts rather than superlatives – save that for the quote.
Try to make one specific point with each paragraph.
Useful questions to answer in these:
What?
Where?
Why is it relevant?
How?
Any further details?
A quote
Include a quote from you or the relevant person. What would you really like to say or highlight alongside this news? This is where you can be more effervescent and excited.
Keep it pithy, to-the-point and in your brand tone of voice.
Remember, journalists might just pick up on certain phrases so think about neat soundbites rather than long, explanatory sentences.
Contact details
Include your content details for further info – name, email, phone number?
About us
We include a “boiler plate” – this gives information about your business – like an About Us on a website. Your business elevator pitch and when was it founded, who buy, awards won etc. Also include website and social links here.
Press release points to remember
- There should always be a clear angle in the release, meaning a journalist should have a reason to cover the news.
- Remember to tailor it depending on who you’re pitching to.
- And never, ever send it out to a blanket list. No “Hey buddy” openers – always research who you’re sending it to and make sure it’s relevant. Otherwise, you’re likely to be junked.
Originally posted on: www.carnsight.com
“Story, as it turns out, was crucial to our evolution – more so than opposable thumbs. Opposable thumbs let us hang on; story told us what to hang on to.”
Lisa Cron, Wired for Story
Did you know that this week is National Story Telling Day? (April 27th)
Storytelling is built into our DNA. For as long as we’ve existed, humans have shared stories. As Margaret Atwood once said “You’re never going to kill storytelling because it’s built-in the human plan. We come with it.”
Quotes aside, storytelling is absolutely vital to humanity (can you tell how passionate I am about this?!) and therefore storytelling is of course absolutely a vital tool in creating a successful business. You may not think so, but here is why being able to tell a good story is key:
People buy from people
What’s your story?
People don’t buy from businesses, they buy from people and this has been proven time and time again. Humans look for points of connection. We want to be understood and to understand. We want something to relate to. You have to be that for your customers.
Having a clear story that highlights who you are as a person, the journey you are on, and how far you’ve come thus far is key for building strong relationships with your customer or client base.
Especially in this day and age, where social responsibility is increasingly important to consumers, people want to know who is behind the brand.
They answer the why?
And the why should we care?
Stories provide the background information that gives the consumer context. It tells them why you were driven to do what you do, and perhaps most importantly, why they should care about that. In PR, the why is incredibly important – if we can’t communicate to a journalist or publication why their readers would care to hear about a business and its news, then it simply won’t get featured.
What makes a good news story is another topic entirely – and definitely one we’ll cover in a later blog so be sure to keep an eye out for that.
Stories inspire engagement
Being able to relate to something and having a good understanding of it gives us a reason to engage. We all have stories to share and our experiences are very likely (undoubtedly in fact) going to overlap in one way or another. Stories offer us a point of connection and are a great springboard for conversation and engagement.
Storytelling in business is a mammoth topic with so many areas to cover (I’ve written a post in the past about finding your business inciting incident that you may also find helpful) and so I want to write a whole series of blog posts covering different elements of storytelling in business. We’ll talk about what makes a good story, how to structure your business story, personal brand and telling your story, and so much more. Reach out to us on socials and let us know what you’d like to read more about with regards to storytelling in business.